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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
One of the primary responsibility of the government is to establish the right education system for its people. Education goal is to prepare our kids for meaningful and sustainable life in the working world. While it is tempting to enforce a national curriculum to ensure all students receive the same quality of education, I believe this suggestion is to restricting and should not be adopted. Nations should establish a basic core curriculum for master of rudimentary knowledge in math and science. Aside from this requirement, students should be left to pursue their own interests.
While the na...
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Sentence: For example, standarized tests, such as the ACT and SAT, do exactly this.
Error: standarized Suggestion: standardized
Sentence: These test help college admission identify students who have mastered the basic ruidmentary knoweldge in writing, reading, and math.
Error: knoweldge Suggestion: knowledge
Error: ruidmentary Suggestion: rudimentary
Sentence: Thus, the wasted time on the required curriculm is not beneficial for these students.
Error: curriculm Suggestion: curriculum
Sentence: If we give this flexibility to school rather than instituting a national curriculum, this inbalance would be minimized.
Error: inbalance Suggestion: imbalance
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