The recent past of mankind has been characterised by immense advancements in the field of technology. It has invaded every single aspect of aan average urban lifestyle; to the extent that we cannot imagine a scenario where a day could be passed without even a single interaction with a machine. As a consequence, people have started to rely more and more on technology to solve our day to day problems and as a result, the ability to think for ourselves is being compromised.
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Sentence: It has invaded every single aspect of aan average urban lifestyle; to the extent that we cannot imagine a scenario where a day could be passed without even a single interaction with a machine.
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Sentence: Advent of technology has limited the time devoted to physical activites as well, which has a postive correlation with increased mental acuity.
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Sentence: In sum, I would like to say that these days technology has brought us in contact with opinions and thoughts of a numebr of people.
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Sentence: Analogous to a machine whoch is not used often, our brains will also rust if not put to use every now and then.
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