A recent sales study indicates that the consumption of seafood dishes in bay city restaurants has increased by 30 percent during past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose speciality is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in bay city are two income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new captain seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.
write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be addressed in order to decide whether the conclusion and the arguement on which it is based are reasonabele. be sure to explain how the answers to the questions would help to evaluate the conclusion.
The writer of the above article , feels that the chances of increase in popularity and profitability of the new captain sea food restaurant may be more due to increase in consumption of seafood during past five years. To prove the above assertion, he stated few evidences. 1) the sales study shows the increase consumption of seafood during past five years. 2) no other restaurants that specializes sea food are found in bay city. 3) most of the families are two income basis, so prefer less home cooked meals 4) they are more concerned about healthy eating. Although, all the above evidences seems...
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