Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents
and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Worrying about children's future, parents probably encourage their kids to choose a field with more chances to get a profit job. Some pupils even hold this belief as truth and stick to it, say trying their best to study in electrical engineering, marketing, management. However, occupy an seemed rewardful position doesn't necessarily means a promising life. It is happiness, having fun, and meaningfulness that evaluate the value of one's live. In my opinion, the college students should consider a field of study of which they have gifts and interests.
First, with such talents and interests, th...
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Sentence: To them, salary, persquisit, or even fame are no longer the most important concerns.
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.235 0.35
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
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