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Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Teachers are the foundations of our knowledge – enhancing knowledge and molding individuals to be well prepared to enter a challenging professional environment. Academic performance is based on two criteria’s; a teacher’s ability to coherently transfer information to the student and the students ability to comprehend what is being taught with great interest and motivation. Thus, a poor performance cannot be blamed entirely on a teacher. In this regard, a teacher’s salary should not depend on a student’s academic performance because teachers are not the scapegoats for poor performanc...
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Sentence: In this regard, a teacher's salary should not depend on a student's academic performance because teachers are not the scapegoats for poor performance, teachers are already underpaid workers, and pragmatically every student will not showcase highest performance.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to showcase and highest. showcase is not a verb.
Sentence: Just because a minority in the classroom did not showcase high performance, it is no reason to blame the teacher by reducing his wages.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to showcase and high
Sentence: Thus, in conclusion, a student performance isn't an indicator of the teachers ability to teach and this should not have an impact on their salaries.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to teachers and ability
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Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 455 350
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No. of Different Words: 224 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.619 4.7
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Word Length SD: 2.991 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 76 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.783 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.297 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.491 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
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