Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
An argurment occasionally these days that the science research should force on the area which can benefit the public. Faced with a mass of nailing-biting information that lies around, one is often likely to be hestiant, for everything has its dichotomy. Tring to aviod being one of the mavericks and parrots of mainstream oppinion, I, after through reflection and contemplation, firmly maintain that the science reserch have to find a balance between the different research fied. To examine the validity of my standpoint further details will be carefully looked into as below.
To begin with, never should we forget the fact that some direction of benefiting the most people may be difficult to achieve. For example, it is impossible to have much improvement in health care that can cure all the disease. Specifically, it need a period of time to do research about how to cure only a single illness. If scientists put all their force to deal with the health care that will be inefficient. Furthermore, the AIDS cost the scientist a long time but still remains as a problem.
What's more it should be underscored that if scientists put too much attention on such fied which may have advantageous to public they would have less time to other researches which may not have direct influence on people but essential for social development such as space technology. For this advanced science will have a significant influence in human's history. If the there is no time or resource to study on these fied that will impede the human process in searching of a new world.
What is also worth mentioning, the development of one fied can also promote the progress of the others. Correlating the evidence above, the development of advanced science will have a optimistic impact on social development. For instance, the invention of the ai helps the health care in some ways such as the help with the operation or manage the treat plan of patients.
To put in a nutshell, it is sagacious to support the statement that scientists need to balance the research between the social development and advanced science.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bout how to cure only a single illness. If scientists put all their force to deal ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...velopment of advanced science will have a optimistic impact on social development...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227154046997 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.154046997389 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.088772845953 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0391644908616 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0261096605744 0.0444667217837 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13315926893 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0287206266319 0.0406280797675 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84292527819 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0417754569191 0.030933414821 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120104438642 0.0997080785238 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0391644908616 0.0249443105267 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0208877284595 0.0148568991511 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2104.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 354.0 452.878318584 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94350282486 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33615819209 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262711864407 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200564971751 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146892655367 0.132149295362 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84292527819 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 219.290929204 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533898305085 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 57.778848318 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.125 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8186756744 59.4972553346 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 48.3961864407 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.77380952381 1.64882698954 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.391690518653 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102777654508 0.123202303941 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0521298848854 0.077325440228 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.588312509167 0.547984918172 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173015806265 0.149214159877 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.161403998019 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0892212321368 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331428428902 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0621907195089 0.0692045440612 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.275328986314 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0653680567796 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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