business, politics, education, government these are very diverse domains, therefore collectively saying the those who are at power in these domains should step down after five years of service is questionable. As it's not about the term of service but also the quality of service. There are pros and cons of everything as a person with experience have a better idea about the working of the system but on the other hand, a youngster has a zealot to achieve something.
If we discuss business taking an example of world's first trillion company Apple inc., Steve jobs the young entrepreneur with the idea of giving a closed environment system to the world has been the CEO of the company for a very long tenure. Steve jobs have taken the company from a garage to a multinational company. No one knows if steve jobs would have stepped down then what will the future of Apple. On the other hand, taking about yahoo which was one of the best search engines has lost his fame even of lots of changes in the administration of the company.
Taking about the most important sector for the growth of the nation that is education. The education sector is responsible for the good future of the nation, hence to enhance the sector of education it needs someone who understands the problem and has been the part of that sector for a long time. The powerful position in this sector should be changed if the growth curve is going down and the authorities are not doing anything to improve.
The political sector is one of the most controversial sectors. The most powerful authority in politics is because of its local support and the support of the locals cannot be decreased with the course of time. The political sector can be good or bad and should be replaced by the residents if they are not happy with it.
The government is the body that runs the nation and according to the government should be changed every 5 years as the power to run the nation should not be centralised to any single political party. The citizen of the nation should have the right to elect there government based on the portfolio and work of the government.
- 133. In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the posit 66
- Humans arrived in the Kaliko Islands about 7,000 years ago, and within 3,000 years most of the large mammal species that had lived in the forests of the Kaliko Islands were extinct. Previous archaeological findings have suggested t 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Business
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66047745358 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53829938865 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488063660477 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5475611027 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.133333333 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198426173345 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604515506976 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636825104863 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103754077321 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423113571698 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.