3. It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Thesis:For a very diverse country like India there are plenty of traditions belonging to different religions.But these traditions are rooted in the villages of the country and not its cities.
Essay:
In today's time where diversity is at it's highest people from different religions having different traditions are living together.such diversity in tradition is usually found in modern areas as compared to rural villages, but that does not necessarily mean that these traditions are better preserved in cities.
The cultural traditions of a particular nation are usually rooted in rural villages.This is because most of the people even though live in cities,have their family origin in rural areas.The traditions are passed on from one generation to the next and finally reach the modern cities.
The celebrations of different traditions seem to be more pure and relevant to the culture when compared with city life.For example,if we consider the Ganesh Festival in India,it is accompanied with huge loudspeakers playing inappropriate songs as opposed to the culturally appropriate and relevant celebrations like aartis and poojas which are usually observed in villages.Most people in cities want to glamorize and show off their wealth under the pretext of such festivities.For example,my neighbor Mohit spends extravagant amount of money on jewellery and decorations for their Ganesh statue, which is not at all in harmony with respect to the roots of the tradition.Whereas, celebrations in rural villages tend to focus more on bonding with people and celebrating the tradition in it's true sense.
Having said this, it is observed that many of the people migrating to the cities are of a more diverse background, where as in villages people tend to stay within their religious circles.Greater diversity leads to the preservation of traditions from different background.that is, many people don't see a tradition limited to a particular religion.many of my Catholic friends enjoy Holi where as many of my Hindu friends are fond of Christmas.Also people in cities have more financial stability as compared to rural villagers, thus such traditions do not become a financial burden on them which allows citizens to preserve such traditions relatively easier.
As we can see greater diversity in cities does not always imply that the traditions are well preserved in cities.The origin of such traditions is always rooted in the rural parts of a country, where such traditions are followed to their truest sense.
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also, but, finally, if, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52849740933 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39685815611 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481865284974 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 23.0359550562 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 226.845333996 60.3974514979 376% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 355.666666667 118.986275619 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.3333333333 23.4991977007 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 5.21951772744 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195343034125 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111872192598 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030898670893 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111872192598 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030898670893 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 14.1392134831 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 48.8420337079 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 12.1743820225 241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.38706741573 129% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 11.2143820225 246% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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