the actoin woud be corret to the amount reasion.
The issue opinion that author said in claim people an action is morally correct it the mount good . Sometime people action to the something new so that is morally good to that condison at that time people some new creating idea and some desent action so people is pay to the amount of the action. Author said othr think is sometime people get marvelus action and that time some accindent in there so that time people get more amount pay for the action so it bad think in that issue cailm.
The issue topic will be dicuss and i am agree with the author tone and we will discuss theat topic at in your own side and we get some good reason and some bad reason so that amount will paid more the action.
First think is the issue some people like as stunt and all that action at that time people get more money to collect to the stunt so that time money is good the that your own. It is useful to the other think and we are
some work is do that this money. That time author said amount is good and the other think is cliam to the author is same condision and stunt man some indgred that time so the result from the amount greter to the action .
The issue author said to reason of that the morality of the all think is depend on the action and more that the important than intent to the person action.A example of that condison some action is shoe to the movie star and the same think as show to the a comman person so that time movie stare get more amount to hte that action. The all morality is that action creat by a movie stare.
the issue we have conculde that more think is that hoew to you perfoem is not so far meinful but the think is useful is who perfor the action and how is more important to the your side and we get more amount to that person.
- some people belive in that increase in the violance in the media in our socity. 50
- sports stars and movies stars have an obligation tovbehave as role models for the young people who look up to them.in retutn for the millions of dollars that they are paid,we should except them to fulfill this scoietal responsibility. 50
- An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be p 41
- all too often,companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to oparet more efficiently. if companies were to spend more to spend more time listening to their own employees,suction consultants would be unnecessary. 41
- the smith corporation should not be permitted to develop the land that is now part of the Youngstown wildlife preserve this sanctuary is essential to the survival of the 300 bird species that live in our area. Although only a small percentage of the land 41
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ion is morally correct it the mount good . Sometime people action to the something...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... The issue topic will be dicuss and i am agree with the author tone and we wi...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...The issue topic will be dicuss and i am agree with the author tone and we will discus...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'pay'
Suggestion: pay
...and some bad reason so that amount will paid more the action. First think is the ...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is useful to the other think and we are some work is do that this money. That ti...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...e other think and we are some work is do that this money. That time author said ...
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Line 6, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ult from the amount greter to the action . The issue author said to reason of t...
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Line 8, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ortant than intent to the person action.A example of that condison some action is...
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Line 8, column 156, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...ortant than intent to the person action.A example of that condison some action is...
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Line 8, column 251, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...ovie star and the same think as show to the a comman person so that time movie stare ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... that action creat by a movie stare. the issue we have conculde that more think ...
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Line 10, column 98, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o you perfoem is not so far meinful but the think is useful is who perfor the action and ...
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Line 10, column 172, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
...the action and how is more important to the your side and we get more amount to that per...
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Line 10, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and we get more amount to that person.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292957746479 0.240241500013 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.132394366197 0.157235817809 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101408450704 0.0880659088768 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338028169014 0.0497285424764 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0338028169014 0.0444667217837 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101408450704 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0140845070423 0.0406280797675 35% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 1.73739607613 2.79330140395 62% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0450704225352 0.030933414821 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.169014084507 0.0997080785238 170% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00845070422535 0.0249443105267 34% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00845070422535 0.0148568991511 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1766.0 2732.02544248 65% => OK
No of words: 347.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08933717579 6.0361032391 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.227665706052 0.366273622748 62% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.0835734870317 0.280924506359 30% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0432276657061 0.200843997647 22% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.014409221902 0.132149295362 11% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 1.73739607613 2.79330140395 62% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 219.290929204 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.340057636888 0.48968727796 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 34.5623316587 55.4138127331 62% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 34.7 23.380412469 148% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4437701844 59.4972553346 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.6 141.124799967 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7 23.380412469 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3 0.674092028746 45% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.0573487032 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 2.04225352113 1.64882698954 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301858781339 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.299469343537 0.123202303941 243% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0934856412365 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.784641440182 0.547984918172 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.205104387956 0.149214159877 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193558614775 0.161403998019 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853008814931 0.0892212321368 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.486272482704 0.385218514788 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.145099130193 0.0692045440612 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234147654532 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545422864853 0.0653680567796 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.