In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any woman or man as a hero. The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Nowadays, the media and technological inventions related to the media tools have been a crucial and inevitable junction in the life of every persons, as far as the reputation, personality, and even the traditions of a family which was once socially acceptable in the society are concerned, There exists a controversy among the people as to this issue that weather the media intensively play a significant role in the life every persons or not. While some people may be agree with the issue, there are various aspects that need to be scrutinized thoroughly before coming to the solid conclusion.
In this era, due to the pervasive discoveries and innovations in technology, people have lost their creativity and engaged themselves in issues that can be really considered a trivial works. In past years centuries many scientists irrespective of considerable lack of facilities pressed their creativity and innovations into services, while an current years the most human beings especially youths have lass gravitations to the unprecedented characteristics, As an example, Marry Koori who was spend a large amount of her time and energy in the lab, finally achieved more rewards from the international organizations such as Nobel constitution for her tries in the chemistry, which not only reached a great famous in the world but also dramatically lead the countries toward the advances. As it was clearly mentioned, it past years the media has a lackadaisical importance on the life of people and scientists, but they could reach to the step-stone developments in various fields.
On the other hand, although the media has been able to foist a new life style on the teenagers, so much so that many older generations sharply stigmatize the media, it effectively pave the way for all prospective youth to show their creativities and open-minded behaviors to the world in various fields. For instance, the driverless electric vehicles which have made a great revolution in the automobile industry, without the coverage of the media could not encourage the support of administrations and government officials. In this regard, the media through introducing some pioneers in this field positively provided the ground to speaking of scientists to persuade the funds of both government and private corporations such as Google. However, one of the important barricades in positive role of media is pertaining to the political issues. With the huge effects of politicians in mass media, they do not permit anyone to achieve the apex of the development and only strive to legitimize their authorities in the country through attracting people toward their policies by offering incentives to them. Therefore, the media in this regard vehemently has a detrimental effects.
In conclusion, if the media leads the human beings toward the innovative and creativity, it would be known as a positive tool, otherwise can has a detrimental effects on the society.
- Some teenagers participate in different activities in school, but others focus only one activity that is important for them. Which idea do you prefer? 78
- Do you agree or disagree in the statement if people have opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a jab that would be more satisfying. 86
- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs. Agree or disagree? 76
- Which one is more important to you for having an enjoyable vacation? friends/accommodation/foods? 76
- life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...that can be really considered a trivial works. In past years centuries many scientist...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ty and innovations into services, while an current years the most human beings esp...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'year'?
Suggestion: year
...vations into services, while an current years the most human beings especially youths...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ics, As an example, Marry Koori who was spend a large amount of her time and energy i...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and energy in the lab, finally achieved more rewards from the international orga...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paves'?
Suggestion: paves
...ly stigmatize the media, it effectively pave the way for all prospective youth to sh...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...known as a positive tool, otherwise can has a detrimental effects on the society. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'speaking of', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254901960784 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.11568627451 0.157235817809 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0921568627451 0.0880659088768 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0588235294118 0.0497285424764 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0294117647059 0.0444667217837 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0406280797675 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10583564954 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0313725490196 0.030933414821 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.145098039216 0.0997080785238 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0117647058824 0.0249443105267 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0137254901961 0.0148568991511 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2949.0 2732.02544248 108% => OK
No of words: 471.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26114649682 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356687898089 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295116772824 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227176220807 0.200843997647 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184713375796 0.132149295362 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10583564954 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 219.290929204 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545647558386 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 65.5637918594 55.4138127331 118% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 39.25 23.380412469 168% => OK
Sentence length SD: 140.487519216 59.4972553346 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.75 141.124799967 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.25 23.380412469 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.674092028746 198% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 68.7616772824 51.4728631049 134% => OK
Elegance: 2.06730769231 1.64882698954 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35463012567 0.391690518653 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.181264316544 0.123202303941 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0475236812269 0.077325440228 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.705720295746 0.547984918172 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155214556192 0.149214159877 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198863185734 0.161403998019 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531474997096 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.538702782912 0.385218514788 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0699453680082 0.0692045440612 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254275092493 0.275328986314 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701470016139 0.0653680567796 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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