An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patient.Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat the medical condition.
The issue says that doctor record of same treating dieases afflicted patients is good so he wiil be eaisly treated the other patient have same medical health.I agree in this issue because Many people suggests some medical specialist in our work it will very high sucess in our improve the medical health of petients.
Firstly,Some doctor are special skill in our working,It can easily find the dieases in people and how to improve health of people.for example nurologist have easy to check the patient condition of mind,Specialist doctor haveability to have all the knowlege of his field and knows the all situation how to treat the petiant.
Secondly,doctor have easy to provide comfort of same dieases of patient and easy to treat so patient are fastly improve our condition and it will very healthy before it admited.For example patient have a problem in the persnality desorder so it will go to the pshycritries for checking oue mind condition and hoe to solve our problem in easy way.because,doctor have may cases for this type easy to hendle and how to treat the patient.
Thirdly,If the same type of issue in patient so doctor have examination easy and it will know which patient have condition improvement and how the solve the problem of some people have not improvement.For example No of patient have admited in one time and same check up regularly so some patient have improve easy and other are so doctor find the problem so treat easy and check up so it will improve our health.
Therefore I concluded Some docter have spcial about our experiance and skill about our field and it will easy to way solve the problem in patient.So People have go to the some special doctor for different diseases spceialist.Because special doctor have all the issue treatment known of the different patient condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... other patient have same medical health.I agree in this issue because Many people...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Some
...e medical health of petients. Firstly,Some doctor are special skill in our working...
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... doctor are special skill in our working,It can easily find the dieases in people a...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Specialist
...y to check the patient condition of mind,Specialist doctor haveability to have all the know...
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Suggestion: , doctor
...on how to treat the petiant. Secondly,doctor have easy to provide comfort of same di...
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... it will very healthy before it admited.For example patient have a problem in the p...
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Suggestion: , doctor
...to solve our problem in easy way.because,doctor have may cases for this type easy to he...
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Suggestion: , If
...and how to treat the patient. Thirdly,If the same type of issue in patient so do...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
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...ient have condition improvement and how the solve the problem of some people have not imp...
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Suggestion: For
...lem of some people have not improvement.For example No of patient have admited in o...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
...people have not improvement.For example No of patient have admited in one time and...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...check up regularly so some patient have improve easy and other are so doctor find the p...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ck up so it will improve our health. Therefore I concluded Some docter have spcial abo...
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Suggestion: So
...asy to way solve the problem in patient.So People have go to the some special doct...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...e the problem in patient.So People have go to the some special doctor for differen...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...lem in patient.So People have go to the some special doctor for different diseases s...
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Line 9, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Because
...octor for different diseases spceialist.Because special doctor have all the issue treat...
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Line 9, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...octor for different diseases spceialist.Because special doctor have all the issue treat...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265432098765 0.240241500013 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101851851852 0.0880659088768 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0462962962963 0.0497285424764 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0586419753086 0.0444667217837 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.101851851852 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0308641975309 0.0406280797675 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80427461498 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037037037037 0.030933414821 120% => OK
Particles: 0.00617283950617 0.0016655270985 371% => OK
Determiners: 0.0895061728395 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0277777777778 0.0249443105267 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0154320987654 0.0148568991511 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1819.0 2732.02544248 67% => OK
No of words: 307.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92508143322 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338762214984 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267100977199 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14006514658 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107491856678 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80427461498 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 219.290929204 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407166123779 0.48968727796 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.294221528 55.4138127331 71% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 61.4 23.380412469 263% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4727112167 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 363.8 141.124799967 258% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.4 23.380412469 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.2 0.674092028746 326% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.21349557522 345% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 88.1100977199 51.4728631049 171% => OK
Elegance: 1.46590909091 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381741795116 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.430603493377 0.123202303941 350% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116100682872 0.077325440228 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 4.03364056036e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.28833736787 0.161403998019 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477857493649 0.0892212321368 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.479261198501 0.385218514788 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102391923036 0.0692045440612 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28833736787 0.275328986314 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477857493649 0.0653680567796 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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