All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
The statement argues that all the students of colleges and university would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in foreign country. I consider this argument to be derived from some specific points because this cannot always be true. Every course doesn’t need the knowledge from some countries and thus, there would not be any benefit to them. So I disagree with the statement given.
It depends on what type of course the student is pursuing. And also on, What knowledge student would get by studying in some other countries should be considered before. Also, if the student would able to bare the expenses of spending such a long time in some other country should be added.
Firstly, It would depend on the course that the student is undertaking because not every course require outside knowledge. While some courses require the outside knowledge to understand what is going on in the world and so going to some other country for studying at least one semester would be helpful to them. Even in such short time one can get some knowledge which can be helpful but it is not true for every courses resulting in the wastage of time, money and other resourses.
Secondly, it may happen that the university or college in which the student is studying has the best pool of knowledge and faculties , World class infrastructure and other components require for the education which is not present in any college or institution of the world. Then, going to some other places for getting knowledge would not benefit at all. Also, It would be helpful to the students economically.
Thirdly, Going to some other place would also require a good economic condition of the students family which may or may not be that good. So, it cannot be considered that every student would be able to afford the fees and other cost of going to some countries. other than benefit this point should also be considered in requiring the student to pursue at least one semester outside the country.
In conclusion, I would like to add that other than just requiring the students to get foreign education other things like that stated in the above paragraphs should also be considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the best pool of knowledge and faculties , World class infrastructure and other co...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...equire a good economic condition of the students family which may or may not be that goo...
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Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
... other cost of going to some countries. other than benefit this point should also be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, while, at least, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50374300224 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.400537634409 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2044955794 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.588235294 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340123840509 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146674890226 0.0831039109588 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19635695703 0.0758088955206 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204199306814 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119988738434 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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