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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...journals access is prevalent, the issue as to whether they are profiting unfairly or not rema...
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Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ing scientific studies available to the general public free of charge outweigh the advantages....
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...h funding comes from taxes of citizens. Many may argue that the taxpayers pay the cost o...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tific studies are made available to the general public free of charge, funding resources could...
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Line 7, column 565, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...lt could not be freely available to the general public. In conclusion, taking all of the ab...
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Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...eneral public. In conclusion, taking all of the above mentioned facts, it is reasonable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26780626781 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86820876806 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549857549858 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6124906278 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.21951772744 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441673211797 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140795800921 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11471736916 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235995222637 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876676943377 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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