All students of the nation should be taught the same national curriculum until they get to college.
School level is the basic foundation of a student's academic career and the individual one becomes is greatly influenced by the information and knowledge he/she acquires in his/her school life. Consequently, the knowledge imparted on a student is greatly affected by the curriculum of the nation. As a citizen of a nation, one must posses basic knowledge of the culture, tradition and social life of people while focusing on the subjects he/she wants to develop their career on. Understanding the importance of the nation's constitution and developing creative thinking ability is also important factor to be considered while developing school level curriculum.
Humanity is the basic and most important feeling one must posses before commencing their career as an engineer, medical personnel or a pilot. Similarly, moral attitude towards the nation and general public is another section one must not lag. He/She must respect their elders and love juniors. Also, he/she must posses good critical thinking ability to tackle real life problems as a professional. Hence, the knowledge and education acquired and in the school level is more important than it is currently thought. Since, as a citizen, and more importantly as a human, one must posses all of the above mentioned requisites along with the in-depth knowledge of the subject matter in which he/she wants to specialize in. Hence, all of the students must study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
National curriculum must consists of all of the above mentioned factors that would help in overall development of an individual. When all of the students are educated using the above mentioned criterion, entire generation of the nation would develop as a good human being and that individual would be admired in the society. Systematic and uniform curriculum would help the students to develop their creative thinking ability and help chose a career he/she would want to pursue later on. This would ensure effective knowledge sharing and more importantly all of the children would develop as a decent human being. Since, children are the futures of the nation. Consequently, entire nation would prosper.
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| 2019-07-22 | Sandeep Dhakal | 50 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...School level is the basic foundation of a students academic career and the individual one ...
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Line 1, column 515, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...on. Understanding the importance of the nations constitution and developing creative th...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
..., moral attitude towards the nation and general public is another section one must not lag. He...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rently thought. Since, as a citizen, and more importantly as a human, one must po...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...importantly as a human, one must posses all of the above mentioned requisites along with t...
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Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...h he/she wants to specialize in. Hence, all of the students must study the same national c...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... National curriculum must consists of all of the above mentioned factors that would help...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rall development of an individual. When all of the students are educated using the above m...
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Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... knowledge sharing and more importantly all of the children would develop as a decent huma...
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Line 5, column 615, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... would develop as a decent human being. Since, children are the futures of the nation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30924855491 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75946788998 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468208092486 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4781507049 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.058823529 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245198505196 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106039654022 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125459068894 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169733834776 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205912078785 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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