All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
The issue contends that a Government should focus on the problems which the they are currently facing, rather than focusing on the problem which are being anticipated by the government to happen in near future.
As the famous saying "live in present" is the best saying that can support this issue. The government current problem should be the main focus of them because the government facing the current issue are need to be solve first, the current problem if not solve can be the root of many other problems in future. The current problems if not solved can exacerbate the problem further and the government would find difficulty in solving the problem and the things can even get more worse.
The advantage of solving current problem will reduce the burden from government and the goverment can then think of the advancement and the betterment of their workplace. If immediate actions are not taken by the government and if they would focus more on future problems then it might happen that the current and immediate problems stay and new problems arises and eventually the government would fail to deal with all the problems at once, so it's better to first solve the current and immediate problems so that they could focus on other problems which could arise in the future. The government then can also give more attention and could more effectively solve the future problem and can get the best way to get out of any problem.
Let's take an example of indian goverment which is also a governing body of indian goverment.the present indian goverment focuses more on the present scenario of the country, what are the issues the country is currently facing and try to resolve it first for the people who are facing the problems. In india the current problem is are poverty and to bring all the people who are below poverty line above it. So the goverment makes policies for destitutes, make certain laws which would help them to overcome poverty. Another current problem is higher rate of unemployment in india, so the goverment had made policies and according to which some percentage of employment should be given to the local people of that area. The goverment after solving the immediate problems and left with only a few problems which are not that neccessary moves to the future problem.
The conclusion is the government should focus first on the immediate problems and after solving them should move further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...ment should focus on the problems which the they are currently facing, rather than focus...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...overnment current problem should be the main focus of them because the government facing t...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... can be the root of many other problems in future. The current problems if not solved can...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...the problem and the things can even get more worse. The advantage of solving current pr...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the things can even get more worse. The advantage of solving current problem wi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... best way to get out of any problem. Lets take an example of indian goverment whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91525423729 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49367167434 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406779661017 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.3733601638 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.153846154 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7692307692 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0583798373047 0.243740707755 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281280778295 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226909933193 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0337946681718 0.150359130593 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022988640914 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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