Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author states that sound moral judgement is an important characarteristic of an effective leader, but it is not as important as a leader's ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers. The author's assumption is flawed in it's assumtion that the two notions are comparable. A leader's ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers is corollary to his ability to make sound decisions. Therefore, the ability to maintain respect of peers is appertenant to making sound moral judgement.
Leaders must have a moral compass in order make the right decisions. Leaders that exercise impaired judgement will definitely lead their people into a catastrophe.Moreover, leaders must make judgements in the best interests of their people, making decisions just to impress their peers destroyes the whole idea of being a leader. The primary goal of an effective leader must always be in the best interests of his people and not a selflish motive to please his or her peers.
Consider, Mahatma Gandhi, if he spent his time being a sycophant instead of making difficult decisions that would prove beneficial to his people, he would'nt have led the Indians to Inpendence. Therefore, an effective leader must favor sound moral judgement when given a choice between that and pleasing his or her peers.
A leaders biggest asses is his or her ability to make the right decisions in a precarious situation. Everyone can butter up their peer in order to get into their good books, but what distinguishes a leader from their rest is their ability to precisely construe a situation and contrive a plan accordingly. This ability is not just a skill but an asset that every leader we remember as great possessed.
On the contrary, it is important to be backed by your peers. The advice given by your peers can be beneficial, but, having said that, an effective leader must deliberate on his own after consulting with his or her peers. One must not make judgements aligned with their advice, just to please them.
Sound moral judgement and maintaining the respect of your peers are disparate duties of a leader but at the same time are appurtenant to each other as well. One can't be a wholesome leader if he or she lacks either. Therefore, when the ime comes to choose between making sound moral judgement and maintaining the respect of his or her peers, a leader must
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...leader, but it is not as important as a leaders ability to maintain the respect of his ...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...in the respect of his or her peers. The authors assumption is flawed in its assumtion t...
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
... that the two notions are comparable. A leaders ability to maintain the respect of his ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ly lead their people into a catastrophe.Moreover, leaders must make judgements in the be...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ould prove beneficial to his people, he wouldnt have led the Indians to Inpendence. The...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A leader' or simply 'leaders'?
Suggestion: A leader; Leaders
... that and pleasing his or her peers. A leaders biggest asses is his or her ability to ...
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Line 6, column 3, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'leaders the biggest'.
Suggestion: leaders the biggest
...hat and pleasing his or her peers. A leaders biggest asses is his or her ability to make the...
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Line 10, column 162, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... appurtenant to each other as well. One cant be a wholesome leader if he or she lack...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80368473919 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426799007444 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9648597057 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.055555556 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336514977465 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142014047386 0.0831039109588 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113472371926 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210973656639 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994190948539 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.