In any domain to make significant contributions, one must consider the past achievements in that domain.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I Partially agree with given statement suggest that In any domain to make significant contribution, one must consider the past achievement in that domain. It is possible to make significant contribution without first strongly influenced by past achivement within that field because of persistent effort and determination. Human are naturally gifted with fightening spirit against things that are difficult to deals with.
Even though it's acceptable to certain extent that wihout considering past achivement one can make significant contribution. It's look like any one can do impossible thing into possible, but it's not same scienrio throught the all domain. at one stage you may fail because of lacking in past history or achivement in that domain.
In politics, if politics party fail continously in 2 or more election. Then at that time past achivement for party may hold an important factor for succeding in upcoming election. so political party may look specific area and work accrodingly for society. In that way political party may achieve success in election by having past achievement.
In Organisation, while taking any order from customer, past history and past achivement of that product plays major role. If an company has well estimation of that product, having previous records such as job compliting hours, elctricity consumption, and cost required for per part of product. Then he may have confirm customer order. In this case while considering opposite case, if you haven't past achivement or past records and still you take order of production, then it may shows some adverse effect such as reducing in fame in market.
While considering other accpet which shows an past achivement not required for significant contribution. In Earlier invention such as fire, wheel, and many number of related tool which having nothing past records or any information still, there are introduced as an effectual in front of world. In Pandemic situation, there are number of inventive idea come from young yuth, such purpose to avoid contact from person to person, or things to things. Even though invention came in to picture are not throught long lasting. Knowledge of past achivement actually matter lots while considering any things.
In Concluding section, it's must for significant distribution one can't regret about past achivement in that domain. It's not only records or data but also an confident estimation that tell whether the thing happen correctly or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gs that are difficult to deals with. Even though its acceptable to certain extent that w...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
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Suggestion: a
...nt of that product plays major role. If an company has well estimation of that pro...
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Suggestion: confirmed
...r per part of product. Then he may have confirm customer order. In this case while cons...
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... person to person, or things to things. Even though invention came in to picture are not th...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: a
.... Its not only records or data but also an confident estimation that tell whether ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, may, so, still, then, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33078880407 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83535012904 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549618320611 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8094695737 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7619047619 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300790548538 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879527705391 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916487807784 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154214869988 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767655489339 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.