"In any enterprise, the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product."
In the context of the above mentioned issue which is based upon the importance of process of making or doing something in any enterprise than the final product it can be interpreted that for any enterprise to become successful in its field the attempt of making or doing something always do possess more importance than the outcome.In any fields whether in industry or in scientific research not every attempt produces successful result sometimes failure may occur.Though there is no certainty of success in certain fields every time but due to the fear of failure if somebody steps back then that will be catastrophic.
In order to illustrate the above issue with an example it can be exemplified that when Christopher Columbus discovered America he was also not certain about his upcoming success but after attempting only he discovered and today also remembered as the founder of America. Example can also be given in the field of scientific research also as only by the process of making and doing something newer avenues can be discovered even after repeated failures.Newton's Laws of classical mechanics were modified by Einstein which helped the quantum mechanics to emerge with its true colours can be considered as a result that had obtained after several attempts.
In industry also the attempts for making or doing something should not cease as only through attempts whether it is successful or unsuccessful the workers of the companies learn useful lessons which they may use in future .
In the space research also for many years now scientists are trying to find the trace of water in moon but due to the limitations in the development of scientific research the scientists are unable to do so but the haven't stopped.
Thus its is customary for the teachers of every educational institutions that they should tell their students to keep up with their attempts in the different emerging fields though failure may occur as these students in future will carry the society towards development and growth.
But in this context it should also be pointed out that sometimes desultory attempts will lead to not only failure but also to moral breakdown of the experimenter. Thus its is advisable in every sectors whether it is industrial or the field of scientific research that attempts should be directed towards a particular goal such that in industry the workers should discuss about the reason of failure of a particular attempt with their higher subordinates so that they can learn from the failure and can take the divine way towards success while attempting it next time. In the field of scientific research also it must be follow
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02727272727 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76266610003 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445454545455 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.320649444 60.3974514979 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.777777778 118.986275619 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.8888888889 23.4991977007 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129967385114 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503414368618 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893368831917 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720151009718 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101012739338 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 14.1392134831 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 48.8420337079 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.8971910112 454% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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