In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In this issue, the author allegation is that principals of any fields need to change after five years. I conceded with author argument principals need to change. But here is one question, “Why leadership needs to change exactly after five years?” So I believe this argument is to some extent credible. I agree with the statement that new leaders beneficial to their enterprise. However, we should keep in mind that, Experienced leaders role are undeniable.
Firstly, in my perspective, the authors claim about the new leader role in business is acceptable. Because younger leader are most motivated and motivation is best for success in any business. If young leader is enthusiastic, hard working so this will useful as perfect example to work with their colleagues. Moreover, Young leaders are aware of new technologies So they can give new ideas for their enterprise to flourish business. For instance, Google’s CEO Sundar Pichai tenure more and more Google product created and successful in the market.
Secondly, new education leader also helpful. If An old education minister changed by younger person So this decision effect to many aspects. Likewise, younger education minister know, market demand, aware of new technologies. Consequently, they can change subjects, create a competition/event so more students can get a benefit of this.
In Addition, the most effect on government. If in every five years government leader changed so people hope that the new government gives new policy, that will fruitful to them. Here it’s like coins have two sides. Changing leaders is also good decision because leaders current action can give result their tenure. For Example, If a current government make more corruption, bribery as a result of this political leader changed in next election and people faith that next leader is more honest and trustworthy than previous.
In sum, it becomes necessary to change the leadership at regular intervals in order to ensure that the best available talent in the market is tapped for leading an organization on the path to success.
- "Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather an 33
- Pie Chart for source of energy 66
- The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals. 33
- Subject: “College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.” 50
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 439, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...e should keep in mind that, Experienced leaders role are undeniable. Firstly, in my ...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...dly, new education leader also helpful. If An old education minister changed by yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30239520958 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86229580581 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2846192261 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.55 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 5.21951772744 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0668760995528 0.243740707755 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226428194924 0.0831039109588 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351276122264 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0382854728818 0.150359130593 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274738085078 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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