As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The statement contends that, a people rely more and more on technology to solve their problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will difficult. But technology was also developed or invented by human thinking only. Reliance on technology helps to complete regular or repeated work more efficiently than manually. However, in the absence of technology life can be very tough. So, I can’t support this argument.
First thing is, development or invention of new thing is very difficult. But human can develop or invent any things. There are abundant scope to innovative more functionalities . Like Invention of computer can describe it best. Basically first computer was made for simple calculation initially but with power of human thinking it is expanded. When first computer was developed it’s c.p.u was very big in size , nowadays their size is comparatively tiny. when in any android application or web sites bug is found, application developer or web developer have to be solve these problems and remove bug from the systems for more reliability.
Second benefit of technology is communication using internet and satellite. Because internet is today one of the important part of our life. In later time human could communicate with each other using telegraph , but in the era of 21st century the human can communicate using internet because of human thinking power. Using machines we can produces things more effectively in less time .
But if people rely lots on technology , they will think less . for instance , a school students use calculators instead of count by themselves. This will affect on their brain activities and make them think slowly. However , using calculator complex sum can figure out easily. Another impact of technology over human is , we use machine for better and fast productivity but day by day a human workers replaced by automated machines. due to this lots of unemployment happen in the world. But without machines we can not produces things effectively and it takes too much time.
Thus it can be concluded that technology provides way to live more easier and comfortable life. A technology which helps us to make our lives easier , allows more free time to think further new functionalities of existing technologies for new invention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20325203252 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90591532655 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550135501355 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3360650037 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.76 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364658752038 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979633379795 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139193230201 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216735527893 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138503622468 0.0667264976115 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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