Newton was hit by an apple from the apple tree, while not everyone, who hit by an apple, can discover the Gravity. It is true, you can archive more when standing on the giant's shoulder.What if, the giant was absent? Or there is no giant at all?In my opinion, it is depend on the field where we need predecessors' achievements for making a significant contribution.
With out the contributons of the past, we can not focus on the area to make more achievements.In medic field, especially, wen have been researching diabetes for decades.The past concerntration was on the insulin which can control the glucose of blood. Having been proved effective, morden medicen continued to make deep research. Today, more and more patients are using insulin pump now, which can be installe with one's body ,and keep on penitrating man-made insulin,which also the past contribution, to one's body with a certain volume detected by device inside body.Moreover, scientists are going on to reduce the pain of insulin pump.That is oral insulin, one pill week witout penetration. On the right path, the scientits will make more incredble surprise to benefit the whole world.
Wthout the contributions of the past,we can not figure what was right or wrong in the field. Because we should know the right direction of the road to major achivements. If ones want to stand on the giant shoulder, he need to find the right one. Pluto was the nineth planet of the solar system once, now the scientis calculated it orbit and mass.Then the discovery showed that with minor gravity and infulence which can not comepte with the other eight planets on the scale,the pluto was obviated from the list. Astronomers, with right calculation, will make more contribution to us.
however, Picasso, Van gogh could not stand on the giants shoulder because therei is no giant in art at all.
In conclusion, I agree the topic partly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95611285266 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82908022725 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605015673981 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.1856868264 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.928571429 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167043542366 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546835996361 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474783608682 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747186430553 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473031026866 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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