Great nations vary in different ways, the sign of the greatness can be defined in many ways. In this statement, the author narrows the range of greatness of the country with general welfare of its people, which I believe is an important factor to show the countries power. As my concern of the topic ,the other factors like ths scientific of archievements and art also represent the greatness of nation.
Fisrst of all, a great nation is a s harmonious nation where the people can live in a peaceful lives. With harmony , the people of the nation can chase the dreams of themselves to make contribution to the country. This healthy recylcing of the harmony is the key to be a great nation. So the general welfare of the people is essetial as an significant to judge the nation's greatness. This is also the basical requirement of a country to pursue the other archievements .
With the basical harmony of the society, the countries' greatness can behave in many ways, especially in art and scientific area.The ancient greek was the home of lots of prominent philosophers of the world. As a powerful country in the history, the strongness made the country availabe to develop its science and art,thus, many art and historical relic left with the significant thought of those philosophers, they all influenced the world for thousands of years, as my concern ,this was the greatness of a country.
What's more, I believe some significant moment will be remrebered by all of us as a personality of a country. In the beginning of the War II, the German troop invaded Poland immediately, while compared with the overwhelming power of the German, the Polanish people was not shocked. Then , horses V.S. Tanks ,they did not hesitated and fought against the German troop directly until the last minute of the lost of Poland. A small country with little people fought against once the most powerful army.As most of us recognized the polanish people were warriors. I believe this is also the greatness of a country, because their spirit is inspring the whole human to fight for justice.
In conslusion , I belive there are many ways to define the greatness of a country, because there are so many features of a nation shock us, some of them benefit the whole world , likewise, some of them are good examples that we all can learn from.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81795511222 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71090864809 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481296758105 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2655603042 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1452828195 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534002709089 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050121564652 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882762863618 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674728587856 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.