Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The most crucial quality a leader ought to posses is staying firm on one's decision and principle and not getting deceived or influenced by others. I support the stated argument that an easily manipulated leader will not accomplish great success.
Determination, willpower, strength to question an institution and struggle beyond the odds are few key qualities a person should possess to be called as a leader. Great leaders across the globe had one common thing of not giving up one of their principles and ideologies irrespective of the external factors or pressure by the oppositions. Mahatma Gandhi, father of the nation India, took the path of nonviolence and strongly believed in it which ultimately led to Independent India.
In today’s scenario, taking an example of any startup one starts at ground zero with mere an idea and the belief to make it true. Mark Zuckerberg CEO of Facebook created Facebook as a social network for campus and now it is a global social network endorsed by the majority of countries. Elon Musk’s idea of sending a car in space sounded impractical and was criticized but he made it through and in 2017 we have a car orbiting the earth.
All great leaders, noble laurels, successful personalities on planet earth quotes one common thing “Believe in yourself”. I impeccably support the argument and would like to conclude by saying “Only the one who sails against the tides reaches the shore”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1129707113 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98496198875 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673640167364 0.4932671777 137% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.0152441904 60.3974514979 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.2 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 5.21951772744 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803775167765 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324015165462 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311948844151 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498319364668 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032917937198 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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