To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
If a person is on higher post in society he should behave in a ethical way. To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standard because his ethics and moral standards tell society indirectly whether the person is capable for that post or not.
To begin with, if a certain individual is on higher official post than he/she must follow certain ethics and moral as whole nation is seeing that person as a role model and if such person fails to maintain a proper ethics and moral in front of society than people will also start disrespecting him/her and will conclude that he/she is not capable for post. Some of the people will adopt that wrong ethics and moral in delay life. For example, If any president of any country starts behaving like hip pop dancer and started dressing like that with long hair and tattoo everywhere he/she will send wrong message to society indirectly and society will conclude that he/she is not capable to become leader of nation.
Further, if a certain individual is not maintaining proper ethics and moral than people will not trust him. Society will start spreading wrong message about him and people will start believing that, that person is not capable for his/her post. For example, if leader of any public office start dressing like a rooky people around him/her and under him/her will start believing that this person in not fit for job. By seeing his/her ethics and moral people around him will not trust him/her. They will see him/her as an incapable leader and people will not like to call such person as a leader because leader in the one who leads his team and present his team in front of everyone and person lacking in ethics and moral in not fit to become leader and lead his team.
In conclusion, a leaders ethics and moral plays very important role in his/her currier if leader wants to become capable and if he/she wants people around him/her should believe him/her than he/she must hold proper ethics and moral which suits perfectly to his/her post. A good leader is the one who have proper ethics and moral and who holds the power to become role model of many people around him.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If a person is on higher post in society h...
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Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a ethical way" with adverb for "ethical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...higher post in society he should behave in a ethical way. To be an effective leader, a public of...
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Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...her post in society he should behave in a ethical way. To be an effective leader,...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...de that he/she is not capable for post. Some of the people will adopt that wrong ethics and...
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Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...and lead his team. In conclusion, a leaders ethics and moral plays very important r...
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Line 7, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e role model of many people around him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7180156658 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12872368498 2.79657885939 76% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.373368146214 0.4932671777 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6104070826 60.3974514979 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.583333333 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9166666667 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145500711912 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763046155487 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079047451028 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127229100565 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755673819556 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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