Being occasionally dishonest is a good way to maintain relationship with your friends and loved ones
Though in day to day life a dishonest person is seen as a unfaithful person, as per author's view being occasionally dishonest is a good way to maintain relationship with our loved ones. Certainly, I support the author's point. Relationship with anyone requires special treatment depends on situation, You can not stick to just standard rule of behavior.
First of all, We believe that being dishonest to someone is wrong, This perception is right but we should not make it as a standard view. We have to understand that one size does not fits to all. Why we need to being dishonest to maintain relationship? As we know the human nature, we always try to protect our loved ones and friends, and another reason is as per human nature How, When, and Where you tell mistakes of your loved ones that matters a lot to realise their mistake and maintain relationship too. For example, take parent-child relationship, Almost all parents once lied or been dishonest to their child, For good reason, like if parents was facing some problems and if child will ask them parents would definitely try to be dishonest and tell them that they are fine or there is no problem at all, This dishonesty is not because of wrong intension,but it just because parents do not want that their child would suffer too.
Secondly, Whenever our loved ones or friends makes a mistake, You can not directly go and tell them roughly that is your mistake, You have to wait for right time and should use right way to tell them, Unitll that time you have to be a dishonest some time. Take an example of two friends, One of them are very exhausted and angry , He do or speak something wrong to second friend, Now second friend has two option either he can say him directly, or just a wait till he become calm and untill then he just keep hearing or noding his head. In a first way there may be a chance that Second one will ruin their relationship and even could not be successful in realiseing first one that he was making mistake.
Relationship is really delicate thing, One has to take every decision with proper thinking, As sometime being dishonest can lead to creating trust issues between them. Thus, with proper reasons being occasionally dishonest for good of our loved once is definitely a good way to maintain relationship with friends and loved once.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... day life a dishonest person is seen as a unfaithful person, as per authors view ...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'fit'
Suggestion: fit
...ve to understand that one size does not fits to all. Why we need to being dishonest ...
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Line 3, column 862, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...onesty is not because of wrong intension,but it just because parents do not want tha...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...One of them are very exhausted and angry , He do or speak something wrong to secon...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... them are very exhausted and angry , He do or speak something wrong to second frie...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[1]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
...ond friend has two option either he can say him directly, or just a wait till he be...
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Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a first way" with adverb for "first"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e just keep hearing or noding his head. In a first way there may be a chance that Second one w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66990291262 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55346134883 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502427184466 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.952105829 60.3974514979 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6923076923 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476159426877 0.243740707755 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180317081536 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155751328702 0.0758088955206 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326459168034 0.150359130593 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131841049025 0.0667264976115 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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