The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
For a society or civilization to flourish and grow i think it is essential to have a leader, one who knows about the people he represents, one who understand peoples sufferings and their problem, one who has the courage to deal with such problem.
Considering the ancient facts or annals, almost every civilization has risen from the ashes or was destroyed to ashes by the very leader who represent the subject. There are leader who a lead their subjects to a far healthier and flourishing life or to make it even more difficult for them. For it is important that the leader must remember that it is the people resposible for the power which resides with him and thus one must not lose contact with the common people and must always strive to attend them. The leader must take steps to workup the problem responsible for their suffering and must give his full attention to them.
The most importnt role of the leader is not only to take steps to deal with the problem but also to see results or their effects, for the reason that introducing plans would not solve problem until they are properly implemented. Now this is where I think the general people play a very imporatant role, because a leader represent a whole community and can not personally give attention to every detail and thus the constant feedback from the people about the policies implemented, or their effects on them can help the leader get an insite into his policies and then work on improving them. This feedback is very important for that fact is that the leader must be informed of the progress, and bring it to his knowledge the problems.
Thus it is also important that the people choose a leader who gives respect to his subjects and attend to their plights, or else the leader abuse their power and then the downfall of the civilization commences. The role of the subjects is also to criticize the leader for the mistake in governance or newer policy implementations, this helps in keeping a check on the steps or the direction where one is heading. Thus constant feedback is the most powerful tool giving to the general publec and it is upto them how to use it, for without them a leader is one with unlimited power, a dictator!!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ty or civilization to flourish and grow i think it is essential to have a leader,...
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Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'leaders'?
Suggestion: leaders
...er who represent the subject. There are leader who a lead their subjects to a far heal...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ing it to his knowledge the problems. Thus it is also important that the people ch...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... or the direction where one is heading. Thus constant feedback is the most powerful ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62849872774 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53585544531 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450381679389 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5746412884 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.363636364 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7272727273 23.4991977007 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220030885523 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950462351327 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414920369222 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150330936326 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156014264308 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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