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"The best strategy for managing a business, or any enterprise, is to find the most capable people and give them as much authority as possible."
The issue of managing a business is a tortuous one. Being a very crucial branch of social sciences, management is a key component for the prosperity of modern businesses. Some people would suggest that the best way to manage a business is to unearth talented people and grant them as much authority as possible in order for the company to be run efficiently. Others however, would suggest that granting authority may be the worst strategy since it can backfire to the company's prosperity and goals. After carefully evaluating the following arguments it becomes clear that the proposed strategy is no...
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Sentence: In sort the proposed strategy lacks scalability which renders it insufficient for enterprises or large corporations.
Error: scalability Suggestion: No alternate word
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 551 350
No. of Characters: 2927 1500
No. of Different Words: 267 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.845 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.312 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.011 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 230 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 191 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 150 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 99 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.831 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.512 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.06 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5