The best way for a society to prepare it young people for leadership in government, indursty, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
As stated by the prompt a sense of cooperation is key to preparing young people for leadership roles. This is an excellent way to teach young people to form and create relationships that will build stronger connections for their careers. Learning to work with others that may have conflicting views and learning to compromise. Lastly Teaching others the skills to improve their work and make working together more efficient.
Learning to work with others and form relationships is key to building a foundation of people that will support you as a leader. These relationships can create a friendlier atmosphere that will offer more room to compromise rather than compete for resources. They will also see more opportunities offered to them that would otherwise be refused because of competitive relationships. The idea of friendship and business partners isn't a new idea and should be strongly considered when wanting to be a good leader.
Learning to cooperate in environments that have conflicting ideas is another area of leadership that normally shows up. A leader that is cooperative and can work with both sides builds a more open environment that has chances to prosper, rather than see communication break down and failure. In environments that both sides seek to claim all of their demands, usually, the loser walks away with biter feelings and opportunities that may have been offered are gone.
The last reason that cooperation is more effective than competition is learning to teach others. The idea of keeping one's skills and knowledge to themselves for the sake of job security offers fewer chances for prosperity. When we cooperate and teach each other we can see more chances to work together and be twice as productive knowing how to approach the job equally. When two people have different skillsets and cant assist each other work can take twice as long.
So to prepare young people for a role in leadership we should be instilling a sense of cooperation. This will offer a more productive future and more opportunities
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...two people have different skillsets and cant assist each other work can take twice a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08928571429 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90065454143 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494047619048 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8946361626 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.588235294 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199959874079 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786650226499 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111145936182 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138087124952 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100700835436 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.