The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
According to the author, we should instil a sense of cooperation rather than competition in young people to prepare them for leadership roles. Cooperation has always been an essential quality of a good leader therefore I agree with the author's claim.
One of the cardinal qualities of a leader is to sacrifice his or her ego and cooperate with others to reform their people's life. From childhood we are made to work on various group projects, sometimes we didn't like our group still we worked together to complete projects. Similarly, leaders will be faced with many such situations wherein they will need to cooperate with their rivals for the betterment of the organization. For instance, In India during the COVID pandemic, different ministers of different states worked together to eradicate covid from the country, if there were dissentation between the states then this would not have been possible.
Furthermore, cooperation teaches young people to make compromises for betterment while competition adds pressure on them to outperform their rivals. For instance, In India to get admission in IIT's students study rigorously for 2 years due to severe competition, the stress on students builds up soo much that few people end their life if they fail to get a good rank.
However, I concede that there should be some amount of competition often in order to bring the best from the leaders. Sometimes a sense of competition encourages people to perform better otherwise they would get complacent and wouldn't try hard to progress. For instance, Employees in the company try their best to get an employee of the month award. The award does create a sense of competition among employees which encourages them to perform their best.
In conclusion, Cooperation is one of the most skills of a good leader and should be instilled in young people. However, they should also be thought-about competition but not to the extent that they start taking stressed about the failures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11384615385 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7988399964 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550769230769 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1549606265 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232958214739 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870858800943 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725770054096 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135576990787 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610721156138 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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