The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them the sense of cooperation, not competition.
The leader is the one who finds the path to accomplish the goals and help others by giving them prim guidance and direction to achieve the same goal together. A leader should have the qualities of being focused, impartial, dedicated and along with this he/she should be kind, caring, understanding others and last but not the least, cooperative!
Cooperation is a term which itself help us to understand that the person will be working with others in a friendly manner and also help them whenever they are in need without bringing in any ego. If you are competitive by nature it will surely help you to be at top of all others but it won't make you a leader. As stated above, a leader will always be there for others and thus, being cooperative will make you a leader and being competitive will make you a boss.
Being cooperative will create an environment of togetherness as compared to being competitive will create an environment of competition. Moreover, working in an environment where everyone is working together will give you a team as a whole which will help you in accomplishing the goals very easily and in very less time. Thus, this will have more impact as a leader than compared to being in a competitive environment.
Also, if you don't compete you will be left behind in the race of life but this will not help you in long term basis and will surely not make you a leader. This will create a bad impression in other people's mind and you won't be placed in their good books. Being competitive will make others think that you are selfish and always want to be above all others. So, people will never come and help you! This all can be summarized as you as a person would not stand as an ideal person in their minds and they won't choose you as their leader.
Thus, competition will make you stand above all others but cooperation will make you stand among all of them. So, for being a good leader one should surely inculcate the attitude of being cooperative rather than being competitive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a friendly manner" with adverb for "friendly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... the person will be working with others in a friendly manner and also help them whenever they are in...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ompetitive environment. Also, if you dont compete you will be left behind in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59166666667 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53486643425 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422222222222 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8685287707 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.153846154 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0555100849036 0.243740707755 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308104070272 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0211968152199 0.0758088955206 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435126185437 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205496569461 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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