The claim states that by instilling as a sense of cooperation in upcoming leaders in the field of government, industry or any other field is the best way. Instead of competition in the young leaders. The claim is fallacious owing to numerous reasons.
Competition is an essential factor to have a balance in the society. If all the leader's of the field cooperate with each other, the basic interest of the people will be lost. Let's illustrate an example if two top companies of house hold goods decides to cooperate and divide products equally so that the sales of the company is surge. Though the sales will surge, the customer's requests will not be satisfied as there is no competition for the company and the customer has to buy the product from them. Competition makes a option for the end customer. Therefore, a chance for the leaders of the field to bolster their products or services for the end customer.
Cooperation in government can lead to dictatorship for a country, opposition is an integral part of the government as the competition spirit make them stand for wrongs of the government. Cooperation in government, industries and other field is required but a sense of competition to make their field best in all aspects gives the leaders a chance to attribute time for improvement.
In a society of cooperation between different fields, the end customer or populace feedback will be no longer considered. As there is no sense of losing the position in the field or the feedback of populace is no longer valid as their is no competition with anyone. Feedback is an imperative aspect in the overall growth of the society.
In the absence of competition amongst leaders of countries, the standard of living of the countries will degrade or will not bolster. If the leaders countries don't compete with other leaders they will never feel the argue to improve the current conditions of country and accept the factor which other countries are using to embellish.
Though cooperation among different field is required for the society to work as required to work together and leader to coexist in the society. Yet the best way for society to prepare young people for leadership is not by instilling sense of cooperation instead of competition. The optimist way for society to prepare young people for leadership is having a prefect balance with competition among fields and cooperation to coexist with each other.
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- "The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition." - Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or dis 50
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- Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9511002445 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81807301186 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41075794621 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0648279394 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.578947368 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.89473684211 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243239378804 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08652200918 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974187700313 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136528302453 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942902247768 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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