I agree with the claim that the best way for society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other field is by instilling in them a sense of coperation rather than competetion.
For one, youngsters will be misled when society instills competetion rather than cooperation. The mindset of youngsters will be to ace in competetion rather than being veracious. For instance consider government leaders who strive hard to vanquish the competition and ignore doing good heartfully but only does good for their sustenance. In other words, the youngsters will employ even unscrupulous ways to vanquish the competetors. In stark contrast, when society instills cooperation then the young people would be able to be scruplulous and thinks to work heartfully rather than using artfulness for safegaurding their authority.
Secondly, youngsters will always be cool and think to just whatever he can because his mindset is fraught with cordiality thinking about others. This is in contrast with the youngsters when the society instills competetion where younsters will not be coardial with the team members or voters and be selfish as they need to vanquish in the competetion .
In a sum, society must instill a cooperation in young people for leadership rather than competetion so that young people will think proactively for the team members rather than being selfish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ble to be scruplulous and thinks to work heartfully rather than using artfulness ...
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...they need to vanquish in the competetion . In a sum, society must instill a coo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in contrast, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34545454545 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91915879904 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540909090909 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6780808533 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32881963804 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160119715911 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185660546988 0.0758088955206 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277366671025 0.150359130593 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221726675395 0.0667264976115 332% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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