The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership is government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership is much needed in every sector of our society: business, government, education...and a good leader not only need to have the skills of motivating people with various backgrounds to work together, but also need to be assertive, look forward with the bigger picture in mind, and sometimes, make tough decisions in order to survive or thrive in the industry. Sense of cooperation is crucial for any good leader; sense of competition is at least equally important. I can only agree with half of the satement, and here is why.
Collaboration is the key to any industry, and being a leader means s/he needs to be able to have a group of people work closely together as a group. In a business setting, leaders need to put sales and accounting together so that sales team knows what are the dominant markets and what markets have potential. The accounting teams will have a better understanding of the sales workflow and how to cut unnecessary costs for the company. At universities, the school president needs to make sure people across campus can work together, so when student is missing classes, professors can talk to students' college advisors so that they can check on the students; when the student is sick or injured, the college nurse can communicate with the athletic coach and advise on how to better help the student to feel better and perform well in athletic games. Leadership means to be able to have people work collaboratively as a team.
Competition, however, is equally important for good leadership. Competition is inevitable in any industry, and a leader who only knows how to collaborate is not able to lead the team to success or even survive in the brutal competition with others. Technology industry is among the most competitive industries nowadays: new products are coming up every single year, smart people with new ideas are being hired so often. A leader needs to have a strong sense of competition so that s/he can move the team to work not just forward but also upward, not just stronger but also better compare to other competitiors. Take environmental issue as an example, Starbucks starts to ban plastic stralls, a few months later, companies with metal or silicon stralls are coming out. A leader in food and beverage industry needs to think on their feet and make sure that they are taking their responsibility and stay competitive in this movement to not lose their customer base.
Even inside any company, leader needs to create a safe environment where staffs are working with each other, but they are also striving to be better and more competitive workers. At the end of the day, employees are the people who drive the company, and a more competitive, capable group of employee can move the entire team further.
It takes more than just a degree or years of work experience to be a good leader. Leadership needs a good balance of collaboration and competition to move the team, the organization, and even the entire industry to become better. In the age of globalization, we need more leaders in every industry who can do that successfully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2571.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 527.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87855787476 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83039070646 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464895635674 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.9 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.0621184445 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.315789474 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7368421053 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31578947368 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964172216618 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408939277875 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511328066416 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593805436233 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335972824061 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.