The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

Collaboration is the most important element of success that is often overlooked. The prompt suggests that it is important to instill a sense of coopertation and not competition in them, if we aspire to prepare them to be global leaders in various fields. I would mostly agree with the recommedation because, in my opinion, cooperation and competition have to go hand in hand for a greater collective success. I would like to state my case based on the following three reasons,

A world with just competition and no collaboration would never be conducive to the advancement of consciousness or leadership. It would likely pave way for a dystopian, success-mongering classes instead of a collective success of humanity. For example, consider the origin of the United Nations. The motive of such a global and cooperative organisation is to instil the sense of growth through collaborative projects and discussions. If each country would just be willing to crush the others in a competitive environment, there would have been more World Wars and Cold Wars. Such a situation would be detrimental to both the countries. Contrarily, as a part of the global collaboration, the leaders of India and Russia have been able to help each other in perilous times by sharing military, technology and diplomats. Hence, to build a peaceful and eventful future, it is necessary for young leader to be as cooperative with the others as possible.

An isolated mind would often have a blinkered outlook and may sometimes be against changes in the environment. It is necessary for 'leaders' to understand the complete spectrum of possibilities and only then would they be able to make pragmatic decisions leading to a collective success. For example, consider post-colonial era of India, a huge sub-continent that was fragmented into plethora of kingdoms, each trying their best to win over the other. It was at such a time that the imperial Britishers have, bytaking advantage of the unstability caused by internal quarrels, gained control over the subcontinent. Imagine a scenario where, despite the tyrannical rule of the British, the kindgoms continue to fight against each other in a competitive spirit. If such a thing were to occur, India would never have gained independence. The most important thing that was required then was a cooperative nature towards a common goal. Leaders like Mahatma Gandhi have adopted that cooperativeness and hence, were able to drive a nation wide movement to expel the Britishers. So, the sense of cooperation for a common goal is of utmost importance for the leaders.

Perhaps, the only thing that I would disagree in the prompt is that it recommends that young people should not have a sense of competition. There will not be progress on technological and social fronts if there is no competition. For example, it is only because USA and Russia have strived to outweigh the other during the Cold War that we have ground-breaking techologies like the Internet, Nuclear power plants and Biotechnology. The same reasoning works in the case of Industrial Revolution when Western countries have participated on a competitive global stage and this has led toa significant increase in the capabilities of humans. Thus, for anyone to excel in a certain field, a competitive sense would provide the push to always strive for greatness.

In conclusion, the global cooperative outlook of leaders of tomorrow is imperative. But that should not come at the cost of healthy competition. Cooperation and competition should bolster each other in our strive towards a greater tomorrow.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1023, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...iveness and hence, were able to drive a nation wide movement to expel the Britishers. So, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, so, still, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3022.0 2235.4752809 135% => OK
No of words: 584.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17465753425 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15131582427 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481164383562 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 961.2 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.214848254 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148964414495 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444308563638 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462446567638 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883479956023 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350560557219 0.0667264976115 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 100.480337079 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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