The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Youth are the leader of our future. To establish a leadership in youth, seniors must teach them about a sense of cooperation not compitition because helping each other can build strong team which is beneficial for our world. On the other hand, if young people would run behind competitive mind top each other then its tough to build a good community in a society. So, cooperation with mutual understanding is very essential to have in youth generation.
In one day our next generation would be leader of our country. So we must teach them about leadership with cooperation. Because without helping each other there would be no gain for society.So this is the best way to teach them. For instance, if they hired by superior position of government position and they have sence of cooperation then situation of the office would be more benign. Moreover, office worker can share their problem to sort out with their leader and it would bring great achievements for the office.
Additionally, If our youngers are given a sense of cooperation for leadership establishments in most supreme position then it also help to get rid of from the some of unwanted hazardous situation. For example, If next generations people have the power of Prime minister position, they try to maintain a healthy relationship with their oppotion party. It is the best approach of a leader. This type of situation can help to get rid of from leading bad environment from the opposition ruler as like strike and other bad influential occourances.
On the other hand, if youth are grown by a sense of competitive minds to each other then it could not be a good way to prepare them for leadership quality. Because due to having this character it can perhaps harm our society. For instance, next generation youth who grown with competive and rival minds they become more ferocious and most of the time they have no sympathy for poor people and they dont do any sacrifiuce for their country. With this type of attitute render them to be a good leader in future and country citizens dont allow them to be leader of them and citizens prohibit them from trhe thrown.
In sum, I think the best and appropriate way top prepare our youth is to develop a cooperation sense in to them rather not developing competitive minds. Because only mutual helping attitude can leads good for our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: So
...ther there would be no gain for society.So this is the best way to teach them. For...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...s in most supreme position then it also help to get rid of from the some of unwanted...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...hen it also help to get rid of from the some of unwanted hazardous situation. For ex...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to prepare them for leadership quality. Because due to having this character it can per...
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...ve no sympathy for poor people and they dont do any sacrifiuce for their country. Wi...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ecause only mutual helping attitude can leads good for our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83004926108 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69205963547 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455665024631 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3092611336 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.210526316 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234469852955 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782779330989 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635642555094 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149278377811 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311540782879 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.