To ensure continuity and a better feature we have to prepare young leaders who will take over and continue the work in government industry or any other field. They will have to work with multiple other people and have them cooperate to the success of their initiatives. Those young people must understand the value and contribution of each individual and how to work together to achieve common goals.
A leader should be like the glue that bring and keep together multiple parts to create that original piece. Because collaboration is needed to reach any goal. Our young leaders must be capable of being the central piece that can bolster the team member to work together.
The biggest realizations of this world has always required specialty from multiple disciplines to achieve that common goal. It takes a leader with great insight to understand, value and utilize each participant capacity to succeed in all kind of projects. Thus the young leaders should, since the beginning, understand the concept of working together; how they can incite the best in each person to lead with efficiency and make everyone feel included.
However to emerge as a leaders, the youth has to challenge each other and prove that they are worthy of the leadership. In this regards, there must be the sense of competition that can make them thrive and achieve unexpected goals.
Since working together is the best way to achieve more, the sense of collaboration should be instilled in our young leaders so they can be proficient leaders of tomorrow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le parts to create that original piece. Because collaboration is needed to reach any go...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ity to succeed in all kind of projects. Thus the young leaders should, since the beg...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ncy and make everyone feel included. However to emerge as a leaders, the youth has t...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a leader' or simply 'leaders'?
Suggestion: a leader; leaders
... feel included. However to emerge as a leaders, the youth has to challenge each other ...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t they are worthy of the leadership. In this regards, there must be the sense of com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, thus, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 257.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01556420233 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60143432009 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529182879377 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1196367989 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13308963321 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489304102061 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417176625498 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802959338084 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479754821106 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.