The young age of human being is more important since its the best time in ones life. At young age human have the power to do anything. The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Competition always create problems. They tend the people to fight. Rebellious behaviour is not good. If the youngsters taught to fight or lead an organsiation with competitive meantality its may create neagative impact. For an example while leading an industry if any issue occur with any other person or industry the leader may take cynical step for successing. They wont hestiate for deceiving or killing the opposite team.
If the leadership are developed with competition mentality rather than cooperation meantality it may cause harm to society.If we take examples for government sector if leaders are with compettaive menaity they wont show any kindess to others seemingly they always want to win. They wont even hestiate to kill or harm other people for their wellfare. Since they have good power they select any path to het succeed.
Insted of preparing the young leaders with competitive mentality they must trained in the sense of cooperation. Unity is very essential in every sucess. The leaders must have companionship and empathy to others. If any organistion or person was in need then the opposite team must ready to help them. If they are trained with negative meantality they wont be ready to help others. A good leader must have robust and sympathic mentality.
In every field cooperation is essential rather than competition.The society is preparing the young leaders so society should taught the youngstres that without cooperation their is no survival for human being. Avoid execessive competition and healty competiton can embrace cooperatuin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17725752508 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8096949957 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.5361668757 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.95 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200987590367 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647761843713 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115843023832 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13291386728 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990319058825 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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