The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The issue of having a sense of cooperation rather than competition is the best way to prepare the young people for leadership in government, industry or any other field is a contentious one. Both the side have strength and weaknesses. However I believe, the sense of cooperation is far more important that the sense of competition, but completely ignoring the completion might lead to ineffective work in their respective field. Hence, a balance between the both is much require to be a good leader.
According to be a leader is a person who listen to the opinion of the all the member and brings everyone inline with the vision of the organisation. He sets the example for other by following the ethic that he want to have in other individual. The sense of cooperation meaning having the attitude of taking everyone together in the path of success is very crucial trait in the leader. This help the group to produce more effective results and great a great bond withing the group.
Furthermore, sense of cooperation also helps the person to work with people lower in their hierarchical position and also with the person in the top. For example, a person working in the government, need to work with multiple sections of the society or with bureucates. Hence, a person alone cannot do all the work, that why building the sense of cooperation become a necessity. Another example, a leader in the automobile plant, need to work and guide the worker working in the factories and also with the customers or the brand ambassador. A project lead need to take into the accounf of all the perspective of the member to have a successful launch of the product. Hence a sense of cooperation is very important.
However, a sense of competition might be necessary in this competitive world to a certain extend. I believe this will help in bringing more effective outcomes and a check to the group if they are working in the right track. Intense completion is not useful and the young people find the way out to be in top of the completion. This may give a person a short term success but it is harful in the long term. The student may not have nay practical knowledge or might end up studying for 14 hours a day. This in future may not be a good leader, as they lack a sense of cooperation.
In conclusion, building and incorporation the sense of corporation is very useful way for the society to build young leaders. Also, a sense of competition to a certain extend might act as a catalyst for a person to be a good leader in government or in industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: extent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6357615894 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77909251618 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441501103753 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3718236289 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4545454545 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59090909091 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192658882665 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608121477574 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768535873583 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127544719909 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068031038032 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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