The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or any other field is by instilling in them a sense on cooperation, not competition.
The world has turned really competitive in the past few years. No matter which position or industry
you want to be part of, one has to face a lot of difficulties even when they are deserving of that post.
Hece, although competition is required, coorporation is rendered to be of more prominence. The
prompt states that instilling the sense of coorporation in the younger generation rather than
competition is more important. I mostly agree with the statement for the two reasons.
Firstly, when one has to inculcate discipline or any disposition in a person, it has to come at a young
age. This has been scientifically proven. Suppose you encourage a child to be competitive from a
young age, yes, he will be competitive but he would not understand anything but that either.
Although competetiveness is natural, when emphasized can leads to many problems. Not only does
it instill a sense of distrust in an individual, a competitive person can also become conceited. This will
hinder him in interacting with people or being social as a child as well as with adults. The above
example gives a summary on how a competitive person without any cooperation grows up in the
society.
Secondly, an individual who is competitive fails to understand the importance of teamwork. One
alone cannot run a company or lead a life. You could be good in one field but you will require an
other person from an other field to achieve your goal as all the fields are interconnected. No one can
be versatile or perfect unless you are a robot. If the top companies such as NASA or ISRO would have
been a one man show, they would have not been able to achieve so much. This summarizes that
being competitive cannot help one achieve everything they have dreamed of in life.
However, competition is required if one wants to be successful than everybody else. Unfortunately,
life is a race. If one wants something, they should be able to get it before anyone else and maintain
what's their's as well. It is true that an individal can chage the world, but an individual can only bring
up an idea. The reason India got it's independence was not only because Mahatma Gandhi fought as
an individual. It is because many people joined him and fought with him for their independence.
Hence, even thought competition is necessary in an individual, coorporation is more important to
establish a change in the world.
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...n in a person, it has to come at a young age. This has been scientifically proven...
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...courage a child to be competitive from a young age, yes, he will be competitive b...
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... child as well as with adults. The above example gives a summary on how a competi...
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... without any cooperation grows up in the society. Secondly, an individual who i...
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...derstand the importance of teamwork. One alone cannot run a company or lead a lif...
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...he fields are interconnected. No one can be versatile or perfect unless you are a...
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...ompanies such as NASA or ISRO would have been a one man show, they would have not...
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...to achieve so much. This summarizes that being competitive cannot help one achiev...
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...sful than everybody else. Unfortunately, life is a race. If one wants something, ...
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...o get it before anyone else and maintain whats theirs as well. It is true that an...
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... world, but an individual can only bring up an idea. The reason India got its ind...
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...ot only because Mahatma Gandhi fought as an individual. It is because many people...
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...idual, coorporation is more important to establish a change in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87409200969 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94205900323 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9278969872 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.52 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.52 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.12 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.97078651685 503% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155637475849 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412005244119 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379659946253 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438602833002 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383519652274 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.