The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry,or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation,not competition.
Leaders all around the world are expected to possess certain qualities that would justify the position they hold.They should be remarkably different form the poeple they lead, and yet be genial enough to gel with them as though they are one of their own people.What type of upbringing a leader should be exposed to is what defines his successes and failures in the coming years of responsibility.In my opinion, a successful leadership is a well balanced mixture of both cooperation and competition,with cooperation leading the ranks.
Being a leader requires the acceptance of the people one would lead, and thus thier cooperation.This quality is thus one of the most powerful weapon in a leader's arsenal.Take for example Mahatma Gandhi,the non-cooperation and non-violent freedom movement that he lead against a whole empire would not have been possible without the cooperation of the masses,who in turn were willing to follow this great leader to seemingly endless trails and tribulations.
Similarly, a successful government requires the cooperation of the masses to function smoothly.Democracy is a breathing example of how the cooperation of the masses is what helps the government run nations.People elect their own leader,i.e, they choose who they are willing to cooperate with.Similar analogy can be extrapolated to numerous fields and industries.A CEO,can only run his/her company successfully,if he/she is willing to cooperate withe the board of directors,and the employees at large.
Competition is an essential ingredient in the formula of success, but not the only ingredient.A established CEO, no matter how fruitful his/her aggressively competitve business strategies might be, would not be able to raise the stocks at the end of the day without the cooperation of the employees.Simlarly,history is rife with examples and anecdotes of how dictatorial empires have been overthrown without the support of the subjects.Competition takes the driver seat once a strong sense of mutual cooperation has been establishes among the team,including the leader.The sense of competition then makes sense when this team with cooperation competes for the top spot.
Thus,in my view, a well-balanced scale with competition and cooperation both being instilled in the younger generations, is important to develop a true leader who can garantee succ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, still, then, thus, well, for example, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55833333333 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58080337044 2.79657885939 128% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 23.0359550562 313% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.542081711 60.3974514979 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 400.2 118.986275619 336% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 23.4991977007 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6 5.21951772744 318% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666755706832 0.243740707755 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374317113394 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0139212054636 0.0758088955206 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374317113394 0.150359130593 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139212054636 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.8 14.1392134831 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 48.8420337079 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 12.1743820225 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.38706741573 136% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 11.2143820225 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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