The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A good teacher is the one who makes his/her students understand the nuances of their actions, be it positive or negative. By focusing only on the positive actions, an personal might be tempted
to belie his negative actions and thus represent a false self-image, afraid of not accepting his mistakes. Thus, ignoring negative actions, would not lead to an individual's well-rounded personal development.
For a person's progressive growth, negative actions are as important as their positive counterparts. Both go hand in hand, when shaping an individual's achievement.
A football coach would try to stress more on his players' mistakes or weaknesses so as to strengthen their overall game skills. If the coach doesn't impart that much importance
to the negative points, the players might not be aware of their weaknesses. In a similar way, a teacher teaching math to her students, cannot mark the wrong answers on a test as right
just to bolster her students' confidence. That would do more harm than aid the students, who would be unaware of their mistakes. Also, negative actions if ignored by parents at an early age
of their child, can lead him/her to believe that whatever he/she did was correct or represents positive actions.
Meanwhile, when we weigh negative actions too much, it can lead to an individual feeling guilty of his actions to an extreme. A student who is not able to learn and score
well can be a victim of his own diffidence. This tendency is known to lead individuals to commit suicides or drug themselves on narcotics.
This is where ideally, we should encourage the person's positive actions even though just to buttress his self-confidence. But to completely ignore the negative actions is not the best solution to
this situation.
Therefore, the best way to teach or impart knowledge is to weigh both the negative as well as positive actions equally. This would foster a better personal development for any individual.
- Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia. Using an observation-centered approach to studying Tertian culture, he concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than 37
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and support 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... focusing only on the positive actions, an personal might be tempted to belie hi...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve actions, an personal might be tempted to belie his negative actions and thus r...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ing negative actions, would not lead to an individuals well-rounded personal development. F...
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Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...-rounded personal development. For a persons progressive growth, negative actions ar...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
.... Both go hand in hand, when shaping an individuals achievement. A football coach would tr...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e on his players mistakes or weaknesses so as to strengthen their overall game skills. I...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...their overall game skills. If the coach doesnt impart that much importance to the neg...
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Line 6, column 77, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...might not be aware of their weaknesses. In a similar way, a teacher teaching math to her student...
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Line 10, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...udent who is not able to learn and score well can be a victim of his own diffiden...
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Line 15, column 84, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...knowledge is to weigh both the negative as well as positive actions equally. This would fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10248447205 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87037343086 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537267080745 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8078138862 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6470588235 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.97078651685 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143157599131 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561607315633 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544442061741 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660621592343 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051248174589 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.