Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators.
The purpose of education is providing fundamental knowledge, good merit, and social responsibility, which needs not only schools but also parents and communities to be involved. The seamless cooperation will provide kid a health growth environment before they step into adult world.
Admittedly, school with professional educators plays an essential role of education. Teenagers learn most of fundamental knowledge throughout schools. As a little kid under 12 years old, he knows the basic math, literacy, biology, physics from various courses and attractive demonstration from teachers. When he enters high school, every student fosters his or her specific interests of different subjects, like history, chemistry, literature, computer science and so on. These courses can only be provided by well-trained teachers. In this way, the importance of schooling should be recognized.
Meanwhile, the power of parenting also can not be underestimated, since one third of a young kid's time is spent with his or her parents. When Bob Dylan was a young kid, he had no interest of the text book during the daily time. However, when he came back from school, his parents allowed him to do the things he liked--playing guitar. The respect and freedom his parents gave makes Bob a tremendous musician later. He once said thanks to his parents since they gave him opportunity to develop hobby after schooling. From this example, we can safely make a conclusion that the parenting way has profound influence on an individual even after many years.
Last but not least, the importance of communities are usually overlooked regarding education. Actually, community can help youngster to build social responsibilities. Nowadays, many young kids involve in the environment activities which are held by local not-profitable organizations. This is a very meaningful action to help children to be aware of the importance of protecting earth, cherishing the limited food resources and valuable water.
In sum, only schools, parents and communities all are involved in education can provide a high-quality life for students.
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 54
- Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators. 50
- Scandals—whether in politics, academia, or other areas—can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that do speaker or reformer ever could. 50
- Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators. 66
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47706422018 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11327300995 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648318042813 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5946710818 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2631578947 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186154044897 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582433246092 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492727764496 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117110520806 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462343518918 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.