Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Replacement of the leader of any group or organisation depends mainly on how well a leader operates it. Possibilities may arise where the leaders are perfect in their roles or not at all fit to lead. But in todays rapidly changing scenario of the society, it has become imperative to change the leadership so as to promote growth in any field, whether it is business, education, politics or government.
First of all, a sense of responsibility and accountability is induced in people at the highest positions in an organisation by forcing a time constraint on them. Sometimes, the awareness of the fact that they may be relieved of their power if they underperform also keeps them from being negligent about their respective roles. Exercising their opinions may be allowed only for a certain time as eventually, they have to pay heed to others' perspectives for the betterment of the company. This precludes them from using their rights fecklessly. Genuine growth in any field whether it is business, politics or education, is possible only through implementation of the collective vision of its employees and not that of a single person.
Second of all, it is imperative that new and more talented people be given the opportunity to contribute towards development of society through their distinctive and multifaceted leadership styles. In today's world, where advancements in technology have being increasing at a fast pace, a need has arisen for new leaders to step up and provide suitable direction for organisations, institutions and governments to move to. Younger people are being employed in the government bodies as they are trained to provide solutions to the socio economic and socio political conditions emerging throughout the world. Students majoring in fields such as Business administration, Technology and science are applying for leadership roles to express their capabilities. These student can use their knowledge of the current scenarios to provide elegant solutions to complex problems that the old leaders are not trained to face.
Third of all, it cannot be denied that the experience based knowledge acquired by old leaders is priceless, but the need for creativity and long term sustenance of an organisation calls for a motley of ideas that are unconventional and original in every sense of the word. For example, the company Apple, had to change its CEOs several times in the early 2000s because they were not able to adapt to changes being made in the economic conditions. Due to this, the company suffered a large amount of loss before Steve Jobs stepped up as CEO and stabilised the company and provided it the correct vision. Innovation can only result if leaders adapt to fluctuating circumstances.
Therefore, going on with same set of leaders does not always prove to be fruitful in several fields of study. To compensate for this, regular replacement of people in power is required to maintain in the balance and also prevent misuse of power. This is applicable for industries in all areas, from science to commerce, everything needs to be governed by variety of views rather than following just one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ome imperative to change the leadership so as to promote growth in any field, whether it...
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Line 5, column 756, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'These students'?
Suggestion: This student; These students
...ip roles to express their capabilities. These student can use their knowledge of the current ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 401, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'change'.
Suggestion: change
... because they were not able to adapt to changes being made in the economic conditions. ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, well, as to, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 10.4613686534 239% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 7.30242825607 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 30.3222958057 284% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 5.01324503311 379% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2634.0 1373.03311258 192% => OK
No of words: 513.0 270.72406181 189% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13450292398 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.04702891845 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99106022343 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 145.348785872 186% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528265107212 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 842.4 419.366225166 201% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1482552039 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.65 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137582715117 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422643719774 0.0996497079465 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398289457077 0.0662205650399 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800552251394 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240390101493 0.0443174109184 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 63.6247240618 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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