An Government approved University and college provide degree program which has elective courses those may or may not beneficial in accordance with student. I Partially disagree with given claim suggested that college and university should specify all required courses and eliminate elective courses in order to provide clear guidance for students. I agree with claim suggested that College students---like people in general prefer to follow directions rather than make their own decision.
First let us take claim into consideration, an required courses to provided by college and university in order to provide clear guidance for student. if an elective course provide market demand value, then college may not eliminate the elective course. an university may take overall view, take suggestion from chancellor or industrial person so that expert advice may help to sure student growth.
Take an review of college, call for meeting of all college principal discussion, take an individual suggestion for adopting elective course in academic courses whether it take fruitful output. There may be happen thing in some of college if due to absence of faculty or staff for that elective courses then due to this reason college not adopt an elective course may fail chance of growth of student. rather in another view an additional elective course may put an advantage of every one resume, which shows display in terms of selection of student in campus drive.
Take reason into consideration, some times if your colleague or your friend's son have complete there degree program and got job after completion of course. If you take advice from him and he give direction to student's and there parents. The student mind may move direction and also search into related elective course, he got some good information and further he decided to complete degree with an elective course which provide me assurance of good job.
Generally parents are more conscious about there child, they just think however my child, but after all he may settle in his life having good job. mostly they are also more involve in there child career, so they may ask to people, they may take direction from peoples.
To sum up with all, University and college may take all thing into consideration before taking any decision on student's career, because it's depend upon student future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
An Government approved University and coll...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t let us take claim into consideration, an required courses to provided by college...
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Suggestion: If
... to provide clear guidance for student. if an elective course provide market deman...
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Suggestion: An
... may not eliminate the elective course. an university may take overall view, take ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... may not eliminate the elective course. an university may take overall view, take ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ay help to sure student growth. Take an review of college, call for meeting of ...
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Suggestion: Rather
...e may fail chance of growth of student. rather in another view an additional elective ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: rather,
...e may fail chance of growth of student. rather in another view an additional elective ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...rse. If you take advice from him and he give direction to students and there parents...
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Suggestion: Mostly
...may settle in his life having good job. mostly they are also more involve in there chi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... career, because its depend upon student future.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecause its depend upon student future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, after all, in general, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18848167539 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55971686608 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510471204188 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.954910034 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 132.133333333 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4666666667 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442358470004 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181182701106 0.0831039109588 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145062420504 0.0758088955206 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248723097389 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193302311165 0.0667264976115 290% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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