The prompt recommends that colleges and universities should specify all required courses and eliminate courses in order to provide clear guidance for students because college students people prefer to follow direction rather than make their own decision. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the prompt because of the following reasons stated in my essay below.
To begin, when the students gets admission in Colleges and Universities, most of the students are not that much aware of their interest and with what they want to move further in career. It can be because they are not that much serious or because of the improper or no guidance from their parents and elders. So it's a college and universities from where they got to know what incites them more by taking elective courses, from their classmates they get to learn many things which helps in directing their future goals. Then comes a time where the students can actually makes their decision with what they want to pursue. As an instance, not everyone family members are that much educated and not able to direct their child future which ultimately ruin the students future. According to survey in India, more than 45% people are uneducated and because of that there is lack of providence. So if colleges and universities will eliminate the electives then it will make the situation more worse because if the student pursue with the courses which doesn't make him happy, ultimately in future the time will come when he/she will give up.
Further, In the rapid changing with technology and development, no one can predict what new technology will come. So in order to tackle that situation in future, student should be versatile by taking multiple electives. Take an instance, few years back Chartered Accountants jobs boom was very much in the market but as the time changed it got vanished. So if a student is having an electives then they can make their path in that career without any issue.
Moreover, A person should be good and versatile. If a person is good in coding it doesn't means that his future will be bright because apart from this their are many things that plays a very vital role in a person life. As an instance, if a person is good in coding and lacks in communication and leadership, then at some point in future his growth will be stuck because if the person is not able to express his knowledge and abilities, not able to take stand then all his hard work will be waste.
Of course, some argue that of if students take multiple electives then he/she will be perplexed with their future goals which they have marked. But as seen above majority of people are uneducated and because of that they are not to guide their children which leads to the draining in students future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2291.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78288100209 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43321542529 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446764091858 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5035012975 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.277777778 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6111111111 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213689291805 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748354667651 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133212268737 0.0758088955206 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151045083949 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173820143469 0.0667264976115 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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