Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.
Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based.
The given claim might not be completely obvious to the given emphasis, as under some conditions it might lead to vague interpretations. Although, goals for different individuals might differ based on their preferences, we cannot necessarily define them to be selfish.
The given advice, 'Follow your dreams' might sometimes lead young people to be successful in their futures, while it might also lead them to some undesired consequences. Young people, often, are motivated by the environment around them, which further lead them to undertake decisions which are completely not aligned to which they wish to pursue their futures towards. Hence, young people must align their dreams based on the field in which they wish to pursue their careers in.
Although the given claims seems to be a little vague with respect to the claim above. Since dreams for different individuals might differ based on their personal choices, it is completely absurd to say that many people's dreams are inherently selfish. Not all of the young people might wish to contribute to society. Some of them might have their own personal choices based on their own conditions to pursue their careers. Hence, dreams are selfish with respect to people might be a completely obvious statement in regards with the dreams of young people.
Counselling might play a major role for the given claim. Sometimes, young people waiver between equally favorable options to pursue their dreams. In such cases, peers or elders might prove to be useful for them to align their goals with respect to their fields of interest. Hence, for some cases 'follow your dreams' might require some help from peers to convert it into worthy goals.
Hence, the given claim might prove to be correct under some circumstances, while it might be completely absurd for some of the cases stated above. Reason seems to be completely vague with respect to the given claim. Not all worthy goals aim to contribute towards society, some might be out of one's selfish desires.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
.... Young people, often, are motivated by the environment around them, which further lead them to undertake d...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y wish to pursue their careers in. Although the given claims seems to be a little v...
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Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ples dreams are inherently selfish. Not all of the young people might wish to contribute t...
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Line 17, column 116, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...while it might be completely absurd for some of the cases stated above. Reason seems to be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10876132931 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47621004305 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425981873112 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8839057044 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4705882353 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174269450642 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764324182157 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415814854206 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113372489336 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444686798571 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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