The claims here sate that the government should provide the financial support needed to the cities in order to preserve cultural traditions of the nation. I agree with the claim, however, the reason presented to accuse the claim is unsubstantive. In my view, the cities are not a favorable place to grow and advance cultural traditions.
The first reason for my belief is that the cities are generally heterogeneous in nature. The basic foundation of each and every city are the people from different cultural and racial group who enter there in the name of searching opportunities. While they enter in the developed cities from ruler areas, they bring their bucolic cultures as well. So, different people come from a different society bring back different cultural traditions. And, I believe that no any specific culture can be preserved in that intermingled areas.
The second reason for my belief is that the people of the city are very busy. They don't have time to think about their culture and tradition. It is found that many people in big cities are even working on Christmas day. The only motto of the people of the city is to earn money, by which they can upgrade their life in the coming future. On the flip side, in ruler areas, the people celebrate each and every festival very nicely. They are found to be prepared for every coming festival. From this illustration, we can easily draw a conclusion that which place is better to preserve and generate cultural traditions, city or village.
Moreover, it is also found that many cities are hypnotized by the culture and tradition of the foreign developed country. It is noticed that most of the people of cities are trying to adopt a foreign culture in the name of modernity. If the government is still wishing to invest money in the cities, it is the totally prodigal decision. If that amount gonna invested in the ruler area, the people will be profoundly excited to preserve and generate the cultural traditions.
By making a long story short, the government should allocate a certain amount of money to preserve and generate cultural traditions of the nation. however, it will be the best way to invest more money in the ruler areas rather than the cities areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: now
...ultural traditions. And, I believe that no any specific culture can be preserved i...
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... people of the city are very busy. They dont have time to think about their culture ...
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...he name of modernity. If the government is still wishing to invest money in the cities, it is th...
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Suggestion:
... and generate the cultural traditions. By making a long story short, the govern...
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...rate cultural traditions of the nation. however, it will be the best way to invest more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, well, while, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84595300261 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55401865082 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456919060052 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2342003256 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.380952381 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308827509132 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100077472238 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808667172132 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192972309782 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802499472644 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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