It is debatable which is the main factor to contribute to the development of in its field. In this regard, I disagree with both the claim that imagination is a more valuable asset than experience and the reason people who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes. This is because there are many fields which require experience and people can be freer to imagine by their experiences.
Admittedly, people can conduct more valuable things with imagination. Especially, in the field of artworks, imagination may be more important than experience. For example, Pablo Picasso introduced and developed his Cubism which was a different form of art of the past. With the luminous imagination, he can express and fulfill his unique art-style. At this moment, the experience was less essential than imagination. Rather, he debunked previous experiences to adopt a new art movement. Unqualified perspectives brought European painting historical forward and inspired many artists. Likewise, it seems necessary for artists to be imaginative to make creative art pieces.
However, in many fields, experiences are important capital for people to establish achievements. In the natural science world of physics and math, experiences would hold a more essential status than imagination. Every scientific deduction must be fully based on careful observation and precise statistic data. A scientist with ample experiences in research, even though he is not very creative, could apply elaborate experiments, collect detailed experiment data, infer possible theories responsively and come to a reasonable conclusion eventually. Imagination could be helpful in scientific research especially when research meets its bottleneck, but a scientist who imagines a lot but has little experience, maybe carry on research with errors and an irresponsible conclusion. In short, it is more important to take experiences for a superordinate character of scientists compared with imagination.
Moreover, in many cases, experiences do not limit people's thoughts. Without experiences, it is difficult to estimate what is happening and how to solve the problem. Lessons which have derived from experiences allow people to make solutions. For instance, Barak Obama, a former President of the United States, overcame the Global Financial Crisis in 2007-08 with valuable lessons of the Great Depression in the 1930s. Since Obama has learned about the crisis and imagined the cause and effect of the crisis, he successfully led the States by proved policies. In this case, experiences are not useless rather helpful to be free to imagine the future. The more creative solutions would be induced by plenty of experience.
To sum up, although it seems reasonable imagination provides more benefits experience, there are many drawbacks when people only pursue imagination. In many cases, experiences can help people have broadened perspectives to overcome embarrassing situations.
- Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.Write a response in which you discuss t 62
- The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of marketing at Dura-Sock, Inc."A recent study of our customers suggests that our company is wasting the money it spends on its patented Endure manufacturing process, which e 48
- The following appeared in a memo to the board of directors of Bargain Brand Cereals."One year ago we introduced our first product, Bargain Brand breakfast cereal. Our very low prices quickly drew many customers away from the top-se 52
- Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In 79
- When Stanley Park first opened, it was the largest, most heavily used public park in town. It is still the largest park, but it is no longer heavily used. Video cameras mounted in the park's parking lots last month revealed the par 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...freer to imagine by their experiences. Admittedly, people can conduct more valu...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ginative to make creative art pieces. However, in many fields, experiences are...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... scientists compared with imagination. Moreover, in many cases, experiences do ...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld be induced by plenty of experience. To sum up, although it seems reasonable ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in fact, in short, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2566.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61487964989 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11122957753 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551422319475 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 822.6 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2348837572 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5769230769 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386811588525 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975320833443 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123910491597 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236854572124 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144234588511 0.0667264976115 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.