Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The topic here raises the controversial issue that whether Imagination is more important or a more valuable asset than experince. We agree that imagination is importanat to give rise to a new idea or plan but to execute it effectively and efficiently experience is morte important as without experience and only by imagining a idea or plan it is mostly bound to fail. Nevertheless from past history and practical life experience only one learns to execute a task properly. So, here I would like to disagree with author claiming that Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience and would argue that for learning about a thing properly it is very important to experience it.
Firstly, a country or organization would never be achive something by only imagining an idea and believe that it would work wityh hundred percentage success when one execute the plan based solely on imagination. I woul like to illustrate this by the example of Indian Space Research Organization (ISRO), where the best scientist of a reason planned a successfull soft landing of its moon rover in its Chandryan 2 based on experinec that it had from the first mission Chandryan I and also based on experince or learning of other space organization of US and Russia. Here, if the team would have only worked solely based on imagination that the way they are executing the plan would work that they would have bound to fail. So, even though imagining an idea that India could do a soft landing on the moon surface they had to learn from experience]\ of their past mission and experince of other countries.
Secondly, a person would never be able to execute his task or job solely based on imagination, here also experinece plays a vital role. For example, a person with more experince would be always preffered rather than a person who had a great imagination of what he can execute. Experinces teaches a person what can go wrong when we try to excute a task and these learning from a experince of a person make him better at his work which is always valued more than imagination of a person.
Lastly, one person can't ever have a better experince of a place or event without experincing it himself/herself and only by imagining that he is present there. A person have to physically go there and experience is to have the complete feel of an environment. One can just imagine that he is at a beach or mountain or rather a concert and fell the real experience of the moment.
In conclusion, although imagination is very important to give birth to new ideas but one have to real experince the execution part or learn from others previous experious of similar tasks to execute it and make it a success. So based on my above explainations and examples although imagination hold an very crucial part but experince or experiment is a more valuable asset and a die hard requirement to understand to know the harsh reality of real world and constrains that one can face.
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75875486381 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81718780151 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437743190661 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 818.1 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7098995035 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.875 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.125 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180037859021 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073233904285 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535134459196 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11195607871 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553635990192 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.