Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The word "Hero" has a significant valuation and it is used as accolade. People attribute this word to a man or woman who helps them altruistically and also he is available in any time. They don't give any excuse to circumvent from the situation of emergency. Now-a-days, it is impossible to find a person who have this qualification. Because, each one in the society are now concerned only for their profit. So, I agree with the point that, the circumstances have changed for the society and it is impossible for them to regard any living man or woman as hero.
As example, in Bangladesh the crime rates are now being increased. While, in real life government was thought to be the hero in a country, aren't considered in present time. In previous period, Sheik Mujibur Rahman who is called father of the nation Bangladesh, because he brings the victory for the country. However, the victory isn't no longer existed for the creation of the violation by people. It is declared an independent country, but the smug environment isn't extant now. People begrudge others joys, victories, they have became self-centered and for this reason, they don't obey any rules or help any one in the danger time. In addition to this, they kill people for their own interest. Because of this, it is hardly to call an alive person hero.
There is another reason, which is, people doesn't have enough time to interfere in other's activities. Like, in United States people are so busy that they don't have abundant amount of time to ask anyone's welfare or to spend plenty amount of time with their family. Most of the children are being raised in childcare in foreign country. Nevertheless, In old times, children see their mother and father as her hero, in recent time it is rare to find this kind of thing.
I want to conclude that, it is important to take care of others regardless selfish nature. One shouldn't concern only about their own selves only. A society is created with many people, so that they can be available when someone is needed. In Islam religion, prophets were considered as hero. Because they were born to help others and bring them in the right path.They However,face many difficulties and tortures but they didn't give up. They vanquish from those and was successful to help others. These characteristics aren't watch out now in any person.
From all of the above reasons I think that, it isn't easy now to find a person who inhibits selfless quality and it is difficult to say a alive man or woman hero. For this reason, I corroborate with the author in his thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, i think, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7416481069 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66572797271 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510022271715 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5316277511 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8518518519 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6296296296 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17112611577 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462879772032 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464867883462 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102024271521 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523156663949 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.